Parliament's Deaf Ear
They too have been deaf to the voice of justice and consanguinity,
and when occasions have been given them, by the regular course
of their laws, of removing from their councils the disturbers
of our harmony, they have by their free election re-established
them in power. At this very time too they are permitting their
chief magistrate to send over not only soldiers of our common
blood, but Scotch and foreign mercenaries to invade and deluge
us in blood. These facts have given the last stab to agonizing
affection, and manly spirit bids us to renounce forever these
unfeeling brethren. We must endeavor to forget our former love
for them, and to hold them as we hold the rest of mankind, enemies
in war, in peace friends. We might have been a free and a great
people together; but a communication of grandeur and of freedom
it seems is below their dignity. Be it so, since they will have
it; the road to happiness and to glory is open to all of us too;
we will climb it apart from them, and. . .
Commentary:
This passage was removed from Jefferson's draft by Congress
because they felt it was too harsh towards the English people.
It was removed because many of the delegates worried about alienating
friends back in Great Britain. This is best illustrated by a passage
from one of Jefferson's journal:
The pusillanimous idea that we had friends in England worth
keeping terms with, still haunted the minds of many. For this
reason passages which conveyed censures on the people of England
were struck out, lest they should give them offense.
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Commentary Provided By: D.J. Mason